Trapped

I feel like I am trapped in an air tight tomb No light or hope here …. Just me Waiting to be spilled from this rancid womb I need to be set free

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/7/2009 5:18:00 AM

You have expressed here what so many feel today. Keep writing. Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/22/2009 5:24:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us James. I enjoyed reading your poetry today. I wish you the best in your future writing endeavors. Love, Carol

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 9/21/2009 10:11:00 PM

Perhaps fears of what is outside this rancid womb may be the trap, a womb is usually a place of comfort, perhaps you are trying to describe a prison, looking for a way to escape. Nice write, easy to relate to. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/21/2009 9:55:00 PM

here are your wings-fly...i can feel the cry for freedom--excellent James---Charma