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Transparent Air

Take me to the place where the air is clear and transparent, like the water that flows down the sides of the monolith an ever flowing, bounteous treasure where my soul feels free take me to that quiet hovel that lies deep in the woods an admirable little zareba where a cave sits in the monolith a cave that never ends like the flowing water and the dreams in my head February 22nd 2014

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Date: 3/4/2014 4:16:00 PM
wonderful win, Anne....skat
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Date: 2/27/2014 2:24:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!! Sara
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Anne Hessler
Date: 2/28/2014 6:09:00 PM
thank you very much
Date: 2/27/2014 11:03:00 AM
You fit them all in so smoothly. Great work. Love, Joyce
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Anne Hessler
Date: 2/28/2014 6:09:00 PM
I had to look up what a zareba was thank you
Date: 2/27/2014 6:27:00 AM
Congratulations on the fine win. Enjoyed the write on the Dreams, anne
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Anne Hessler
Date: 2/28/2014 6:08:00 PM
thank you very much I appreciate it
Date: 2/27/2014 3:25:00 AM
spelling mistake Anne you used quite it should be quiet shame as a great write congrats on placing ty for entering hugs
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Anne Hessler
Date: 2/28/2014 6:08:00 PM
i'll get right on fixing that thank you

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