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Hidden memories never leave… They hide in places that deceive… A subconscious thought engulfs my mind… Leads us down a hall we’ve left behind… A blurry vision all too clear… Rising scars once again appear… In an escape through dreams I write my way back… Into a place where you can’t see the cracks…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/17/2015 4:00:00 AM
lines with curves of wisdom and landscapes of awe! My mind is in a park of joy to how I manage selecting this page. Keep on writing dear poet and as always, a wonderful 7 without a doubt!
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Date: 4/8/2015 2:18:00 AM
Well penned. My fav line "In an escape through dreams I write my way back…" #7
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Date: 4/8/2015 2:17:00 AM
Well penned. My fav line "In an escape through dreams I write my way back…" #7
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Date: 3/20/2015 10:37:00 PM
good seeing you back here with your lovely writing. Long time no see!
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Date: 3/20/2015 8:42:00 AM
Sometimes those memories makes us stronger MJF. I enjoyed this gem of yours. Hope the weekend will be a great one :)
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