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Transparency

Author Note: I wrote this after the Address last night as my take on the transparency of our government. Where does the white go when the snow melts? It becomes transparent, for all to witness its passage from one form to another? It will never again have substance or be recognized as what was its original state. Transparency, doomed to mix with unsavory elements, no longer a brilliant white, rather, becomes covert. Covered by dirty slush to be stomped throughout the halls of government, to be spread around under the guise of openness. Soon, will become invisible, no longer a nuisance, transparent, to forever be squelched by power and corruption hiding behind closed doors, where transparency is not allowed, where truth becomes lies, where is hidden.... where the white goes when the snow melts

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/11/2010 10:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry X2 making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Mac. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/10/2010 5:12:00 AM
Congrats Mac on having two poems selected in the first round of competition in the P.S. contest.. good luck my friend in the next phase ..luv..
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Date: 10/25/2010 11:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being picked to be featured this week Mac. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/28/2010 4:30:00 PM
very interesting....the best one I've heard recently ..which i do believe but didn't know..is this was meant to be a Republic not a Democracy..not sure what the difference is but it dern sure hasn't been a Democracy in a LONG time! Off to wikipedia for clarity!
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Date: 1/28/2010 8:53:00 AM
The snow always makes me think of "innocence," Mac. And just as we innocently place our faith in politicians only to have our trust betrayed, Mother Nature's gift to earth is turned to dirty slush by an unappreciate people and an unsavory climate. This is an outstanding poem, Max, and it's going to my favorites. Tremendous analogy and insight here! Love, Carolyn
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