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Transition

It was almost like twilight this morning Grey clouds so low on the hills Not far for rain to fall Double Kimo Gutters rushed their burdens toward the sea The shards of summer swirling Winter’s finger beckons

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Cecil Hickman

Date: 1/1/2010 4:37:00 PM

beautiful flowing lines with wonderful imagery, I liked the title you chose for this piece, it leads into the words within this one,,Thank you for reading and commenting upon my words,,,Blessings..Cecil

Date: 12/20/2009 4:53:00 PM

Wow! Good use of imagery and personification for a artistic view. There is so much depth in just six lines. Well done! Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/16/2009 3:39:00 PM

Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry with us today Barbara. Love, Carol

Brian Strand

Date: 12/16/2009 12:12:00 AM

One for my favourites Barbara,especially like the enigma depth in first triplet.Rgds Brian & thanks for your always welcome comments

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/15/2009 2:57:00 PM

Magnificent imagery and a sense of serenity, even as "Winter's finger beckons." There are mornings like this here as well, fellow LNC. Today the fog was so think it seemed like gray clouds were everywhere. I'll bet the Pie Lady has her apron on again real soon. Take it easy at work and enjoy the holidays with your family. Much love and gratitude for your friendship this year as 2010 approaches, Carolyn

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/15/2009 2:56:00 PM

This is so wonderful, Barbara!! (Not far for rain to fall...and winter's finger beckoning....terrifec lines!) What a nice poem, for this rainy day! ~ Love, Carrie