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Sonnet: Transient Of all my almost-loves and far-too-soons, Hers brought a heat most akin to summer’s sun. I ill-assumed, one night in joyful June, A pair so young may ever-laugh in unison. That season we peeled the rind of unripe love, No heed paid the holocaust by autumn, Till it was warmth we lay in bed bereft of, When roses dead had warned our winter’d come. Such loves birth as flood then burn to vapor, From eyes a pain downpours, torrential rain; Hence I plan to leave next summer’s savior, Before lips aflame douse to kiss in vain. She’ll think me true and bare me her nude heart, As I don armor then from her depart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/17/2016 10:10:00 PM
remarkable
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Date: 8/30/2016 4:52:00 PM
a lovely sonnet poet
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Date: 8/27/2016 6:35:00 AM
Interesting sonnet, with a sad, almost tragic outcome..... :-)
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Date: 8/15/2016 1:09:00 AM
Oh....there is much depth in this write. My favorite line here is....Such loves birth as flood then burn to vapor. So true. So true. It sometimes is easier to put on the armor than suffer pain. Thanks for the visit to my POTD and welcome to PS. :)
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Pariah Love
Date: 8/15/2016 3:03:00 AM
Thank you! For the welcome especially.
Date: 8/15/2016 12:48:00 AM
Interesting read, Georgio...pd
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Pariah Love
Date: 8/15/2016 3:03:00 AM
Appreciate it!
Date: 8/14/2016 11:29:00 PM
Georgio, very good... skat
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Pariah Love
Date: 8/15/2016 3:03:00 AM
Thank you, Skat.

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