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Transformation

The flames dwindle to a flicker in the fireplace I watch the stippled ceiling dance like stars in an exploding new universe My chest heaves In, then out In silent anticipation of my transformation From a world of emptiness To one of a promised bliss, And in one last gesture i blow a kiss To this vanishing life I reach out for those everlasting arms To guide my tattered soul Through a tunnel of light and love And all thats wrong is now made right I step from mortality to eternity's light, Peace, joy, love fill my hollow shell I wake up, a new ode to tell.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/6/2013 7:46:00 PM
Carl, i love the new tale you will tell... Does transformation feel good?? I enjoyed the purity from this poem... always~ LINDA
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Date: 2/6/2013 11:32:00 AM
Absolutely brilliant, my good friend! Superb writing... have a great day! Jack
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Date: 2/5/2013 5:06:00 PM
I enjoyed your poem.I also appreciated your visit and comment. Have a good evening
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Date: 2/1/2013 10:07:00 AM
A profoundly beautiful write, Carl! Great work! Love, Kim
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Date: 2/1/2013 6:51:00 AM
Carl, it's just gorgeous! - Deep and beautiful! - Have a nice weekend, do something fun. - or just relax. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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