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Transfiguration

My soul is transfigured in your anoited presence among these twisted vines and flowers as they turn to harvest... The beloved apparitions of my rite leave me for all eternity my soul feels like an abandoned child forbidden in this month of March to go and gather flowers for his brethren... Still I gaze at the tender portrait with timid smile always on your face with purple-red ember of passion fulfilled and nurtured by your favor... I sigh freely in your presence and seek to bring you home to me in this field of poppy and flowers my arms around you like twisted vines of grapes.. ~ ~ ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/29/2014 9:09:00 AM
I am speechless, outstanding piece! Romance at it's peak.
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Ken Carroll
Date: 3/29/2014 10:51:00 AM
Thank you Richard..Good to read from you!
Date: 3/26/2014 5:16:00 PM
by the way, Ken, was this for Deb Guzzi's contest? It is so lovely, I had to tell you again..
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Ken Carroll
Date: 3/26/2014 5:56:00 PM
Thanks again! No just a romantic pondering..
Date: 3/26/2014 12:42:00 PM
the depth of your very essence lights this page, ken... beautiful!.. huggs
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Ken Carroll
Date: 3/26/2014 1:54:00 PM
Thank you Nette! Hope you're having an awesome day..
Date: 3/26/2014 12:33:00 PM
- Truly written with beautiful and warm feelings,Ken ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/26/2014 1:53:00 PM
Thank you Anne! Lovely to read from you today..
Date: 3/26/2014 8:17:00 AM
I'm with Andrea on this one! Lovely imagery...but more so...love the longing in those last few lines. Great write.
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Ken Carroll
Date: 3/26/2014 12:15:00 PM
Thank you Eileen for stopping by!
Date: 3/26/2014 12:16:00 AM
wow, ken, amazing imagery. A great poem to see late tonight.
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Ken Carroll
Date: 3/26/2014 12:15:00 PM
Thank you Andrea for the lovely visit!

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