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Transcendent Love

Will you be loving me ‘til time is naught? Your fingers only know of suppleness, will they not flinch to touch skin wrinkle-fraught? My beauty withers, cup reached emptiness… Your love has set my heart aglow, renewed ‘tis ev’rytime your words lave over me... Like soothing rain on desert sand subdued, I soak it in, drunk for eternity Do forgive me, for ever doubting you, this pain has ravaged me, yet you’re still here. ‘Tis I you love, this I now know so true, please stay with me, for death creeps in so near Let saccharine lips meet for one last time The windows close now, yet leave love sublime 00612162011

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/5/2012 7:04:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in ~Debbie Guzzi's~ "Something Different" contest Nikko. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/13/2011 8:52:00 AM

A belated congratulations on your placement in Brian's sponsored contest Nikko. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/11/2011 3:54:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/9/2011 5:56:00 PM

Congrats Nikko sweetie on a third place win with this outstanding creation penned by u luv... happy and honored to share place with so many wonderful poetesses...oh... hope your weekend was peachy keen ...

Lori Lucas Mcclure

Date: 10/9/2011 2:21:00 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved win!! Amazing oem really enjoyed reading it!!!! =====Lori

Judy Ball

Date: 6/23/2011 10:56:00 AM

Oh this one is so sad. Filled with emotion and bittersweet love. Good job my friend. God Bless, JB

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/17/2011 11:10:00 PM

nice,,, Nikko,,, been here for a bit,,lol,,, someone,, is at my messenger... love... what a gift to open,,, take care,..p.d.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/17/2011 9:29:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Nikko! So happy for you. As for your comment on my blog, old poems are perfectly fine. No need to write something new if you have already written one about a ghost or ghosts. Looking forward to receiving your entry. (No names as Jack and I are judging blindly.) Love you, Carolyn (leaving for the MRI now)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/17/2011 5:38:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Francine's "Sonnet" contest Nikko. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/16/2011 10:56:00 PM

Nikko, this is far better than what you did before.it is almost perfectly metered. So what was your secret? Did you consult a meter maid? heehee. I really like it and like Chris says,it FEELS very classical. A REAL sonnet in this contest. I am very proud of you. LUv, Andrea

Francine Roberts

Date: 6/16/2011 7:03:00 PM

congrats Nikko on your Hm in the contest with this simply stunning sonnet, wonderful job

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/16/2011 7:01:00 PM

Congrats Nikko on your HM with this awesome Sonnet my friend.. enjoy well deserved honor with luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/16/2011 2:56:00 PM

Very sweet and lovely sonnet, nikko. good luck

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/16/2011 2:41:00 PM

so scary sad...wow...good luck hon! Light & Love

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/16/2011 2:06:00 PM

So passionate, Nikko! Beautiful images and a perfect entry for Francine's contest. The last couplet is amazing and I can feel the love so clearly in your sonnet. I'm really envious of the way you write about love. It's hard for me. Surely a winner! Love, Carolyn

Jack Horne

Date: 6/16/2011 11:16:00 AM

I love this sweet sonnet, Nikko - sure to be a winner : )

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/16/2011 8:13:00 AM

Wow!! I just love this Missy :) hehe, why would the ban you? What did you do? Oh yeah, good luck for the contest with this gem *mwahugs*

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/16/2011 6:15:00 AM

Good, luck in the contest,..p.d.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/16/2011 5:50:00 AM

wow, reads like a classic, nikks... how romantic and fluid in sentiments! aha, emo ka pala, lol!... super winner for me "like soothing rain or desert sand subdued!".. whoot, whoot..:) huggs, nette

Anthony Nutter

Date: 6/16/2011 3:09:00 AM

Such an excellent job, the writing took me back a century or two in time. Loved the read. http://www.amazon.com/dp/B0052U4O5U

Liz Walsh

Date: 6/16/2011 3:06:00 AM

Really beautifully written - Liz

Kash Poet

Date: 6/16/2011 3:03:00 AM

A lovely passionate Sonnet on love nikko.....good question asked here....best wishes.