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Transcendent Feelings

His tragic symphony plays its sadistic melody in my mind consistently. The arousing masochism that lingers in this clouded air knocks on my door with a riveting rivet that drives me insane incredibly. Sanity therefore departs my mind as its "in" brother fights for a reason to exist in this season of deplorable beauty. The symphony has now left me in a tiresome state of nudity, where everything shines with unbearable cruelty and a hint of raging novelty, dies.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/14/2012 12:06:00 PM
Beautiful peice of writing here. So very discriptive. Well done! :)
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Ravenn Wolf
Date: 10/17/2012 6:17:00 PM
Thank you very much Sabrina xD
Date: 10/14/2012 5:31:00 AM
Beautiful piece..I could feel heart and soul through every word..JL
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Ravenn Wolf
Date: 10/17/2012 6:18:00 PM
Thank you JL, that was honestly my initial goal in writing this. Thank you.
Date: 10/13/2012 8:05:00 PM
‡ I Understand This Place This State Of Mind In Part, Beautiful Precious Ravenn. I Could Venture Into Quite An Extended Moment In Re, Hopelessness And Melancholy And Chains And On And On ? Seek And You Shall Find. Swimming As One Can Unto The Horizon; Reaching For The Sky. Everything Is Going To Alright, Rock A By, Rock A By - Beautiful Poem. Truly. Love, Rachel ‡
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Ravenn Wolf
Date: 10/17/2012 6:18:00 PM
Thank you so much Rachel, your opinions and compliments are greatly appreciated :)

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