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Transcendent Beauty

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Transcendent

I waited for her for so many years She lived within my imagination When I first saw her I was breathless She was beyond any expectation She lived within my imagination Until the day she stepped into my life She was beyond any expectation I've come to realize dreams do come true Until the day she stepped into my life There were so many doubts within my mind I've come to learn that dreams do come true Dreams sometimes happen when we are awake There were so many doubts within my mind I was unsure of how to live this life Dreams sometimes happen when we are awake My life began with her angelic smile I was unsure of how to live this life Somehow it seemed like living in a fog My life began with her angelic smile Eternity dwells with in her beauty Somehow it seemed like living in a fog When I first saw her I was breathless Eternity dwells within her beauty I waited for her for so many years

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/14/2014 7:59:00 PM

What a true romantic you are Richard. This is very beautiful!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/15/2014 3:56:00 PM

Thanks Connie you are kind.

Monterey Sirak

Date: 3/14/2014 7:47:00 AM

Such lovely romantic poetry for your wife. Your love for her leaps from the page.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/14/2014 8:49:00 AM

She has caused my heart to jump for 22years.

Honestly J.T.

Date: 3/13/2014 7:11:00 PM

Awesome poem you have here

Honestly J.T.
Date: 3/14/2014 11:41:00 AM

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/14/2014 8:50:00 AM

Thanks Honestly, can I call you Honesty for short?

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/13/2014 1:06:00 AM

wonderful poem Richard, the poem gave its self eternal beauty. Very touching... Linda

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/13/2014 7:38:00 AM

Hi Linda, I am happy to see you are back. Thanks for the thoughtful comment.

Russell Sivey

Date: 3/12/2014 11:45:00 PM

This is surely a terrific Pantoum, you have come a long way from your first attempt of this form! This is a very awesome write my friend! You have created a romantic poem deep within this poem! I really enjoyed reading this delightful piece this evening! What a lovely poem, Great work!!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/13/2014 7:37:00 AM

What a nice thing to say Russel, I appreciate it.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/12/2014 4:52:00 PM

Eternity dwells within her beauty-What an awesome verse../Dreams sometimes happen when We are awake,Thiose waking dreams are the best in my opinion./So many beautiful verses..guving me a feeling of fluttering wings upon your shoulder.

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 3/13/2014 9:32:00 AM

Good morning to you too Richard : )

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/12/2014 4:54:00 PM

Wow! It is so cool being quoted! Thanks Charmaine.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/12/2014 4:43:00 PM

Awwwww....full and sweet...quite a treat...it can't be beat! Ok...that was cheesy, but this is a lovely poem! :) Angelic smiles will do that to someone!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/12/2014 4:47:00 PM

What sweet thing to say.......Thanks, Richard.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/12/2014 4:44:00 PM

I am sure you have broken a few hearts with your angelic smile.

Ken Carroll

Date: 3/12/2014 4:27:00 PM

Nicely penned Richard!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/12/2014 4:29:00 PM

Thanks Ken

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/12/2014 4:28:00 PM

Thanks Shadow, sorry you are getting so many messages. Each time I tried to post for Eileen it posted to yours. Thanks for commenting Shadow. Hugs Rick

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 3/12/2014 4:19:00 PM

full of feelings and very romantic write Rick hugs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/12/2014 4:30:00 PM

Hi Eileen, see message to you below.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/12/2014 4:27:00 PM

The soup is doing weird things, the above message was for you Eileen.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/12/2014 4:26:00 PM

Hi Eileen, Thanks for the positive comment. have another look I am now finished writing it. Hugs Rick

Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/12/2014 4:19:00 PM

OH WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Isn't this a beauty! Your sweetie will love it. Hmmmmmm....it doesn't get much better than to have someone write poetry about you. She's a lucky lady. Great write, Richard....as always....