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Transactions Between You and I

You You give me laughter After you teach me how to be a liar You give me truth After you remove my fantasy factor You give me desire After you stipulate no ever after You give me hope After you think I’ve taken back my desire You give me lies After you realize I am stronger ME I give you laughter Because you were my desire I give you compassion Because you were deserving I give you a future Because your views were limited I give you truth Because you needed it I give you strength Because you are so brilliant I give you love There was no reason TF

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Date: 2/28/2013 12:14:00 PM
Love how you described how each person compliments the other. Very important to recognize that in a relationship. Love the creativity!
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Date: 2/27/2013 9:26:00 PM
Nicely done. I am not familiar with all the different styles of poetry and I'm not really sure how to label mine. This is one of the styles I am unfamiliar with but I like it very much. Good job.
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Date: 2/27/2013 7:33:00 PM
What a strong poem Abigale :) this is a new format for me :D - hug, yanny
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