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Tranquility

Woodland reflections In waters so calm and still Create scene serene For Raul's Tranquility Haiku competition

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Funom Makama

Date: 6/11/2012 4:46:00 AM

This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/18/2010 12:48:00 PM

Very descriptive write that drew a picture in my mind...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

Gert W. Knop

Date: 7/12/2010 8:36:00 AM

nicely penned and great imagerny, Janette! Enjoyed reading you Haiku toda afternoon. With 38°C outside in the shade one better stay inside!!! Thank you for your kind comment and have agreat week!...:) Gert

Christopher Mason

Date: 6/7/2010 9:03:00 AM

It has such a splendid lilting quality -- it's such a gift to be able to convey a mood so vivdly with so few words.

Izzy Gumbo

Date: 5/18/2010 2:01:00 PM

Beautiful Haiku Janette :)

James Fraser

Date: 5/2/2010 8:47:00 AM

Awesome images i see in your words Janette >> James

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/17/2010 7:37:00 AM

Readers get a sense of peace just reading this one. Nicely done, Janette! ~ Carrie

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/17/2010 7:01:00 AM

The waters do seem very serene, Janette. As you say, they are "so calm and still." Best wishes for success in the contest. Hope you are staying busy and finding that writing is helping lift your spirits. Love, Carolyn