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Tranquil Paradise

TRANQUIL PARADISE You are the dream, that smothered my nightmare Your being, is as fresh as the morning dew I feel your presence like the warmth of the midday sun on my skin Your smile melts me into floating oblivion Your voice comforts me in an embracing hold Your kiss is where I could spend eternity Your words are an echo of my thoughts Your love is tranquil paradise I am forever yours Living in your love

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Jide Badmus

Date: 2/23/2010 3:34:00 AM

brightness is the ambience of this sweet piece.simple and precise, that's how a love poem has to be

Danny Nunn

Date: 2/6/2010 4:21:00 PM

You have quite a way with your words in this one my friend, great write...Thanks on Lemonade,,,,that is the only way to go thru life is with the sweet stuff..Thanks Danny

Duke Beaufort

Date: 1/31/2010 2:17:00 PM

A beautiful piece. How did you come by such a positive message? It appears to be a reflection of a wonderful life. I hope that is the case.

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 12/11/2009 8:46:00 PM

Awesome! Very beautiful write! Thanks for sharing. Caroline.

Lynette Chachere

Date: 12/8/2009 10:07:00 PM

This poem really does relate to my "Bond Between Two Souls" it's like an answering to your lover. great poem.no, outstanding poetry my friend!! -Forever&Always -Lynette

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 12/8/2009 10:32:00 AM

Who could ask for anything more than beautiful love to build a tranquil paradise. Your poem is heart reaching. Lovely. Thank you for sharing. Lovingly, Dane Ann (soup mail)

L'Nass Shango

Date: 12/7/2009 1:39:00 PM

John Donne would have loved your company And I would be jealous to yield him The treasures of your word ... their single beauty

Lena Townsend

Date: 12/7/2009 10:50:00 AM

Such a romantic and touching write. Beautifully penned and full of the passion that lives within the soul of the writer. Great title for such a gentle and peaceful write. Smiles from Lolita

Malcolm Dyer

Date: 12/6/2009 10:18:00 AM

wowo to grewat poems in a row Ilike your style

Martha Malloy

Date: 12/6/2009 7:53:00 AM

Job well done, Simone! Bravo! Bravo! That is a very beautiful verse and well-written. Loving and heart-felt. I agree, the two poems are similar. True love is such an awesome virtue to experience. Thanks for sharing your gift!

Tim Ryerson

Date: 12/6/2009 6:22:00 AM

Beautiful and VERY romantic, Simone! Keep 'um coming! - Tim

Donald Roddy

Date: 12/4/2009 10:57:00 AM

OK SIMONE, THIS ONE IS A WORK OF ART. YOUR PASSION RISES TO THE TOP. I THINK I'M IN LOVE. LOL :+) DONALD RODDY

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 12/1/2009 10:38:00 AM

This is an enchanting Love Poem, Simone. I hope the person for whom it is written reads this. Thanks for your encouraging comments on my poem Whisper Something Sweet. -Mohammad

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 11/28/2009 8:46:00 PM

Dear Simone, This is TrUE LOVE Excellent Your Heart is full I hope it is returned to YOU tenfold Very Beautiful POETRY ALWAYS YOURS...HG

Izzy Gumbo

Date: 11/27/2009 8:13:00 AM

This is stunning and just beautiful. A fave! :) Thank you for sharing with us.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/27/2009 12:13:00 AM

passionate and deep..lovely indeed--Charma

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 11/24/2009 3:37:00 PM

if lover was not in love with you before this poem, Simone, heads up cause lover is surely gonna be after !! 4th and 5th lines my favs. Also, Thank you for your comment. -Robert

Moonbee Canady

Date: 11/22/2009 1:40:00 PM

Very Beautiful ... A Lyrical-List-of-Love-Note ... Very Nice ... MoonBee

James Marshall Goff

Date: 11/22/2009 7:57:00 AM

soup mail!

James Marshall Goff

Date: 11/22/2009 6:02:00 AM

Hi Simone! yes! I join my esteemed friends in admiration of your style of love assimilation in this cool poem! "Your being is as fresh as the morning dew" WHOOSH! very nice! and thanks for welcome comments, I rarely ink my thoughts on divorce ......(once earlier) this topic cuts pretty close to my quick.... (this poem goes to my fav's!) All The Best... jimmy james goff

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/22/2009 3:09:00 AM

Very passionate write to someone that you love. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Date: 11/21/2009 7:43:00 AM

Interesting view on love. Nice use of imagery. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for taking time to comment on my poem. Keep on writing! Karen

James Fraser

Date: 11/21/2009 2:25:00 AM

Another most beautiful poem Simone, my your an early bird today. Have a wonderful weekend >> James

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/20/2009 7:12:00 PM

What beauty.. what visual .. what expressive thoughts of a special love .. u are blessed ... your title is also wonderful.. thankxxx for sharing this beautiful poem .. so enjoyed ... am waiting for my love to yet arrive... blessings ... luv ... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"