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You are the dream, that smothered my nightmare

Your being, is as fresh as the morning dew

I feel your presence like the warmth of the midday sun on my skin

Your smile melts me into floating oblivion 

Your voice comforts me in an embracing hold

Your kiss is where I could spend eternity

Your words are an echo of my thoughts

Your love is tranquil paradise

I am forever yours  

Living in your love

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  1. Date: 2/23/2010 3:34:00 AM
    brightness is the ambience of this sweet piece.simple and precise, that's how a love poem has to be

  1. Date: 2/6/2010 4:21:00 PM
    You have quite a way with your words in this one my friend, great write...Thanks on Lemonade,,,,that is the only way to go thru life is with the sweet stuff..Thanks Danny

  1. Date: 1/31/2010 2:17:00 PM
    A beautiful piece. How did you come by such a positive message? It appears to be a reflection of a wonderful life. I hope that is the case.

  1. Date: 12/11/2009 8:46:00 PM
    Awesome! Very beautiful write! Thanks for sharing. Caroline.

  1. Date: 12/8/2009 10:07:00 PM
    This poem really does relate to my "Bond Between Two Souls" it's like an answering to your lover. great, outstanding poetry my friend!! -Forever&Always -Lynette

  1. Date: 12/8/2009 10:32:00 AM
    Who could ask for anything more than beautiful love to build a tranquil paradise. Your poem is heart reaching. Lovely. Thank you for sharing. Lovingly, Dane Ann (soup mail)

  1. Date: 12/7/2009 1:39:00 PM
    John Donne would have loved your company And I would be jealous to yield him The treasures of your word ... their single beauty

  1. Date: 12/7/2009 10:50:00 AM
    Such a romantic and touching write. Beautifully penned and full of the passion that lives within the soul of the writer. Great title for such a gentle and peaceful write. Smiles from Lolita

  1. Date: 12/6/2009 10:18:00 AM
    wowo to grewat poems in a row Ilike your style

  1. Date: 12/6/2009 7:53:00 AM
    Job well done, Simone! Bravo! Bravo! That is a very beautiful verse and well-written. Loving and heart-felt. I agree, the two poems are similar. True love is such an awesome virtue to experience. Thanks for sharing your gift!

  1. Date: 12/6/2009 6:22:00 AM
    Beautiful and VERY romantic, Simone! Keep 'um coming! - Tim

  1. Date: 12/4/2009 10:57:00 AM

  1. Date: 12/1/2009 10:38:00 AM
    This is an enchanting Love Poem, Simone. I hope the person for whom it is written reads this. Thanks for your encouraging comments on my poem Whisper Something Sweet. -Mohammad

  1. Date: 11/28/2009 8:46:00 PM
    Dear Simone, This is TrUE LOVE Excellent Your Heart is full I hope it is returned to YOU tenfold Very Beautiful POETRY ALWAYS YOURS...HG

  1. Date: 11/27/2009 8:13:00 AM
    This is stunning and just beautiful. A fave! :) Thank you for sharing with us.

  1. Date: 11/27/2009 12:13:00 AM
    passionate and deep..lovely indeed--Charma

  1. Date: 11/24/2009 3:37:00 PM
    if lover was not in love with you before this poem, Simone, heads up cause lover is surely gonna be after !! 4th and 5th lines my favs. Also, Thank you for your comment. -Robert

  1. Date: 11/22/2009 1:40:00 PM
    Very Beautiful ... A Lyrical-List-of-Love-Note ... Very Nice ... MoonBee

  1. Date: 11/22/2009 7:57:00 AM
    soup mail!

  1. Date: 11/22/2009 6:02:00 AM
    Hi Simone! yes! I join my esteemed friends in admiration of your style of love assimilation in this cool poem! "Your being is as fresh as the morning dew" WHOOSH! very nice! and thanks for welcome comments, I rarely ink my thoughts on divorce ......(once earlier) this topic cuts pretty close to my quick.... (this poem goes to my fav's!) All The Best... jimmy james goff