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Tramping Fears

Thoughts once we dreamt of Were boundless and infinity call Opening thee gazing eyes Fears were all we could look for While life is full of devastating fear Dreams are full of idealistic charm And thou am at the crossroads; Choices made are most hard to bear Some say you can do whatever you want Rest create fence that’s hard to overcome Hence, am stuck in unspoken expectations In my invisible fears and in my oblivion Someday I will rise, strong and still Will change my world into beam of truth Walking on stones and pebbles under the shadows I will reach my destiny whole and alone. Momal Sana 10/25/2015

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Date: 10/25/2015 6:24:00 PM
Hi M. Sana, this is deep, I love your first poem. WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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M. Sana
Date: 10/26/2015 3:08:00 AM
Hi Linda.... thank you so much for your words and openhearted appreciation... Hopefully I will enjoy reading and writing too ... :-D .... stay blessed!!!
Date: 10/25/2015 3:06:00 PM
Momal, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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M. Sana
Date: 10/25/2015 3:30:00 PM
Hi.Thank you so much... means a lot... surprisingly it is a very active and interactive site.. I wasn't expecting it at all.. I am very new to poetry, infact i just discovered that if I put my heart and soul to it then I might do little decent poetry.... Besides there is nothing to tell except that I am a med student and so is my sad poetry!!! and my hibernation time is looming closer so until next time.... stay blessed!!! And i would be honored to be your poetry soup friend..! cheers!

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