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My Teacher said I must learn to defend my left side; my weak side is soft and generous, bruises easily with pride. My right arm is strong, ulna and radius reinforced with titanium plates and screws, bonding bone to bone. My fist forms in defense and flashes up to cover my eyes. In response, a quick round-kick to my left elbow stuns me to the ground, transfixed by acute pain in guise. I have become soft to a sharp kick, a reflex delayed. In the dullness of training, the soreness of practice the Master said, "This is an exhibition. Trust me." In the moment of trial, I forgot this instruction and stood not still, reacting to an impulse of fear. The coming blow puts in the path of my Master my weak elbow, now black and blue. His hand reaches to pull me up, my right arm strong in his. Helps me to my feet, he says, "Next time trust me."

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/12/2013 9:37:00 PM
And so the pen remains mightier that the backfist - unless they stab you with it! Another work full of insight!
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Date: 11/27/2013 12:45:00 PM
Martial Arts Angel You delivered a spinning back fist of poetry to my lazy day! I saw 7 stars!
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Daisy Goodman
Date: 11/27/2013 3:16:00 PM
Thanks! what an awesome comment! appreciate the 7 stars!
Date: 11/27/2013 7:34:00 AM
Martial Arts artists Ahoy! lovely work
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Daisy Goodman
Date: 11/27/2013 8:19:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 11/26/2013 10:27:00 PM
I looked at the list of best new poets and you are number one then i chose to read this poem and thought why cant Poetry soup push you to the best ten on soup am in love with you art
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Daisy Goodman
Date: 11/27/2013 5:29:00 AM
wow! thanks for the awesome comment! I actually didn't know I made the list! I'm new to the site and haven't explored it yet. I'd love to read some of your stuff, too!
Date: 11/26/2013 5:03:00 PM
sometimes "trust" does not come easy but in time we all learn wonderful work
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Daisy Goodman
Date: 11/26/2013 5:08:00 PM
it is difficult, is it not? thanks for your comment!
Date: 11/26/2013 10:07:00 AM
I'd imagine LIfe being the "master" in this writing. A lot of wisdom in your lines. Great job & nice to meet you, Daisy!
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Daisy Goodman
Date: 11/26/2013 10:38:00 AM
I tripped over my own feet.
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Daisy Goodman
Date: 11/26/2013 10:37:00 AM
Not so much. My teacher and my master are words I use for my martial arts instructor. I literally have a huge bruise and my arm is in a sling, lol.

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