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Train of Pain

As I sit in the car Cold air blowing on my face So as to stop That try hard tear From making a path of sadness Down my face I feel like I've been hit By a train Car after car Filled with pain

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/9/2016 5:21:00 AM
Deep little poem soUnds painful. Skat
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Date: 5/8/2016 8:58:00 PM
Nice abc poem, Sarah Jane, I really like this, giving you a top smile. Linda
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