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Train Journey

boarded train at birth journeying endlessly with little possessions amidst noisy clickey-clack stopping at stations meeting new bidding adieu to old through pleasant surrounds and dark tunnels pondering about life and destination trying to make some meaning of this meaningless journey by reading scriptures seeking to end this journey forever

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Date: 1/13/2022 6:02:00 AM
I like how you compared life to a train journey. Well written! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 1/13/2022 6:15:00 AM
Thanks! God bless!
Date: 1/11/2022 4:59:00 AM
I'm wondering if the last two lines refer to you finding what you are looking for in life and that you are not there yet? I often try to read ' between the lines' :) Cheers - Gary
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 1/11/2022 7:46:00 AM
You guessed correctly. Thanks for reading and commenting
Date: 1/10/2022 6:40:00 AM
I can relate to being on the train as if it was lifes journey. Nicely penned. Congratulations on your winning placement.
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 1/11/2022 4:34:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 1/10/2022 6:03:00 AM
A whole life-story. Train journey as a symbol. Great work. Flows smoothly. Congratulations!
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 1/11/2022 4:33:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 1/10/2022 1:15:00 AM
A thoughtful poem, Rama, congratulations:)
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 1/11/2022 4:33:00 AM
Thanks

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