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Train Date

I got on the train I was feeling insane I was late for my date A lady sat beside me She looked me up and down All I could do was frown She smiled at me Like she fancied I’m late too for my date with you

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Susan Ashley

Date: 8/18/2017 8:54:00 PM

Soulmates maybe..? Hope you had fun! Enjoyable poem Niall :)

Niall Fulham
Date: 8/19/2017 2:04:00 AM

Hi Susan , imaginary train but had lots of fun writing my friend ::)))) hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/15/2017 3:58:00 AM

- Maybe it was a perfect date :) ? :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Niall Fulham
Date: 8/15/2017 9:19:00 AM

Hi Anne-Lise , lol the only perfect date is your shadow :::)))))hugs

Patricia Cresswell

Date: 8/14/2017 8:20:00 AM

Blind dates what horror and late at that. Niall have you stirred up some memories for mr. lol This poem is a peach.

Niall Fulham
Date: 8/14/2017 1:13:00 PM

Hi Patricia , lol thanks for comment :)) hugs

John Fleming

Date: 8/14/2017 1:54:00 AM

Unusual but compulsive little poem, Niall--enjoyed the ride! All the best - Cheers! :) john

Niall Fulham
Date: 8/14/2017 1:12:00 PM

Hi John , nice to meet , thanks for comment:))

Becca Teagan

Date: 8/13/2017 5:56:00 PM

It must have been destiny :)

Niall Fulham
Date: 8/13/2017 6:06:00 PM

Hi Becca , I believe in destiny ::)))hugs

Akkina Downing

Date: 8/13/2017 2:28:00 PM

Lol! Well enjoy your date and have lots of fun :) :)

Niall Fulham
Date: 8/13/2017 4:37:00 PM

Hi Akkina , lol it all comes from my imaginary train :::)))) hugs ,,ps love your new pic::)))

Tim Smith

Date: 8/13/2017 1:00:00 PM

Lol...smiles go a long way

Niall Fulham
Date: 8/13/2017 1:03:00 PM

Hi Tim , they sure do lol :))))

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/13/2017 12:59:00 PM

Cute poem this is niall :)

Niall Fulham
Date: 8/13/2017 1:02:00 PM

Hi Heidi , thanks for comment :))) hugs