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Trading Places

There are millions of people trying hard to survive, from disasters and illness needing help to stay alive. Yet here we are complaining when someone hurts our pride, and broken hearted lovers contemplating suicide. Some people abuse young children not caring what damage they do, and the seriousness only hits home when it's somebody close to you. Take a look inside a hospital see the people in dispair, wanting to live their normal life but needing our loving care. It seems our personal problems have come to make us blind, but trading places with one of them would quickly change your mind.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/2/2009 11:13:00 AM
A very enjoyable read you have written and shared with us today. Thank you Norm. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/1/2009 5:12:00 AM
Thanks for putting my problems in perspective! Well written poem with a great message. I'm sending it to a friend who works in a hospital. All the best, Krista
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Date: 8/1/2009 4:46:00 AM
Nicely written. Just take a job as a volunteer somewhere and get involved this will remove much of our selfcenteredness. Sara
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