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Is there a purpose to this world, Forged by a man and led by his soul, Something pure to make us whole, Guided by heart and reasons beyond? Or is this all just a god's game, In his garden are we cornered to play, Too narrow minded to be self-aware To the extent of finding our own way? Years wondering we may spend Hoping to find that one way We'd feel right following to the grave Unregretful and peaceful on our final day. A treacherous quest, mildly to say As what we find may cause us dismay Since not all paths seem light in advance Some require our sincere faith.

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Date: 6/11/2016 7:09:00 PM
You give the reader much to think about with this poem... Very well written, Davor. Congrats on your placement in the contest!
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Davor Miljkovic
Date: 6/11/2016 8:17:00 PM
Thanks and happy thinking! Wherever it may lead you to :)
Date: 5/23/2016 4:46:00 AM
Deep write and very good! Congrats on your placement
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Davor Miljkovic
Date: 5/23/2016 4:51:00 AM
Thanks, glad you've enjoyed the read :)
Date: 5/23/2016 12:32:00 AM
Davor, Congratulations and thank you for sharing a poem you are proud of. Stop by my latest blog "Innocent of All" and enjoy the warm smile. :) **SKAT**
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Davor Miljkovic
Date: 5/23/2016 12:34:00 AM
Thank you and will do ((:
Date: 4/24/2016 6:50:00 PM
Excellent piece here Davor, you have asked many probing questions. I am of the opinion that we are all playing our part(s) in a physical computerised game. A good first hurdle to overcome is knowing you are not the body currently occupied.
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Lenny Gazbowski
Date: 4/24/2016 7:16:00 PM
The physical body is but an overcoat which we discard when its time to leave the 'building' :-) We are both the wave and the ocean.
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Davor Miljkovic
Date: 4/24/2016 6:58:00 PM
Very possible. I'm of the opinion we are something of a light beam coming from a large river of light we can call universe, and that light beam projects itself through lenses, soul, mind and such, and the goal is to polish those lenses so that our beam can project itself as little crooked as possible. That would be the short version of it :)
Date: 2/24/2016 4:10:00 AM
- Welcome with your first poems here on PoetrySoup, Davor - PoetrySoup is simply the world's best :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/17/2016 10:22:00 AM
Davor, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Davor Miljkovic
Date: 2/17/2016 10:29:00 AM
Much appreciated and looking forward to reading your poems :)

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