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Toxic State

Bullets wrapped in death Hitting the frame of life Humanity left with no breath, Shadow of love holds knife Peace has dissolved in hate Dark and dangerous is life, Tears trickle down my eyes World is in a toxic state Unable to filter truth and lies. Dec 20, 2016.

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Date: 1/16/2017 8:58:00 AM
The world is in a toxic state its dark shadow blocks out the sun..my first thought after reading your poem
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Date: 12/25/2016 6:06:00 AM
Truly a worthy winner. Congratulations, Kai
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Date: 12/24/2016 12:44:00 PM
Beautiful lines, Raina. I love the way you do magics with words.
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Date: 12/24/2016 6:18:00 AM
Excellent! Congrats!
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Meenakshi Raina
Date: 12/24/2016 12:17:00 PM
Thank you...
Date: 12/24/2016 12:53:00 AM
Well expressed, congrats on a fine win.
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Meenakshi Raina
Date: 12/24/2016 12:18:00 PM
Thank you...Richard.
Date: 12/23/2016 10:49:00 PM
Congrats on your placement, Meenakshi. Well deserved.
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Meenakshi Raina
Date: 12/24/2016 12:18:00 PM
Thank you...
Date: 12/23/2016 8:14:00 PM
So concise, so powerful and true. Congrats on your well-deserved win, Meenakshi! Janice
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Meenakshi Raina
Date: 12/24/2016 12:18:00 PM
Thank you...
Date: 12/23/2016 2:32:00 PM
Well done . Congratulations :)
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Meenakshi Raina
Date: 12/24/2016 12:19:00 PM
Thank you...
Date: 12/23/2016 1:49:00 PM
Powerful through every line - excellent, Meenakshi.
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Meenakshi Raina
Date: 12/24/2016 12:23:00 PM
Thank you...
Date: 12/23/2016 1:01:00 PM
World is in a toxic state indeed. Well deserved placement.
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Meenakshi Raina
Date: 12/24/2016 12:24:00 PM
Thank you...Darren.
Date: 12/20/2016 10:08:00 AM
It can be difficult at time, Meenakshi. loved your poem:)
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Meenakshi Raina
Date: 12/24/2016 12:20:00 PM
Thank you...Daniel.

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