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Toxic State

Toxic State Endless endeavors embryonic embrace Finite forever’s in a platonic place Silently searching with afflicted affections Of love’s misguided daunted deflections You can not penetrate this superman soul Love can pour out but not fill the hungry hole Isolated illusions dismantled desires Terminal toxins within flameless fires. Dec.03.2016 Toxic State - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: FJ Thomas

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Date: 12/25/2016 10:02:00 AM
Congratulations, Kai
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Date: 12/24/2016 6:29:00 AM
WW very nice alliteration. Congrats!
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Date: 12/24/2016 12:59:00 AM
One of the best. Congrats and Merry Christmas.
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Date: 12/23/2016 2:13:00 PM
Well done, WW! Concentrated essence.
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Date: 12/3/2016 9:09:00 PM
Very good, ^WW^, poem... good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
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Date: 12/3/2016 8:10:00 PM
I think she will really love this one. Excellent!
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Date: 12/3/2016 7:19:00 PM
I love the alliteration Wingman. Great poem:) Good luck my friend.
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Date: 12/3/2016 6:25:00 PM
Good luck on the contest. I particularly liked the alliterations. Agnes
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