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Towns Folks Are the Target

There's many subjects near and dear to my heart But none so dear as blowing farts off a cart On our way to the market Towns folks are the targets They're not even safe in the underground car park © Jack Ellison 2015

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Michael Tor

Date: 10/2/2015 2:04:00 PM

lol Jack This is an airy write. I'm glad your mixing it up with gas. No smoking please. lol

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/3/2015 6:53:00 AM

Smelly too!!!! LOL

Tim Smith

Date: 10/2/2015 1:18:00 PM

They all hold noses he gets near...hide undercover for his stench they fear...his cart is quite fast...the smell sure lasts....we wish he'd get the heck out of here

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/2/2015 1:21:00 PM

Okay on a scale of one to ten, I would rate that one a nine... ALMOST!!!

Carol Eastman

Date: 10/2/2015 12:19:00 PM

As LimmerJack takes his farts to heart... The town folk also took part... Thank goodness farts are lighter than air fine art... And better than that #2 darker retort... Or we'd have to run if were were very smart!...

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/2/2015 1:15:00 PM

Farts seem to be taking over my thoughts!!! Methinks it's a conspiracy!!! LOL Love, Jake xxx