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Town Called Tranquillity

I'm in the town called Tranquility absorbing the sun Holidaying am I amidst the valley of said sins Such joyous commotions viewing children's fun Seeing happiness abound in wondrous spin But it's the nature of being here, knowing it's begun Cotton wool clouds caught by grayed demons be It's just a matter of moments that they engulf all we Next morning I awaken to skies of deadened grey In the distance funnels of evil rotate their dread Swirling spiral vortexes never shy in their display Their ignorance now shared delivered imbed Such her power no prisoners she now portrays Overturned cars, houses adrift trees now stripped If such were to be human on a drug fueled trip God, build me some mountains to surround this plain Allow said sins to be attracted to forever dissipate Never to allow grief as such, these tremendous pains Their height being there simply closes the vortex gate Lets learn from said angers that they never will again I'm in the town called Tranquility absorbing the sun Holidaying where am I, seeing parasols in lightly spun .

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Date: 5/29/2015 8:39:00 PM
huge James, just beautifully written.. :) Again when we hage our talk on the phone Ive said to you the lines I like much... :)! (((hugs)))~olive eloisa
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James Fraser
Date: 6/3/2015 2:55:00 PM
Thank you Olive, I love our phone chats, and the ideas that bounce off each other, and such shall continue for many a call//poems ((((( hugs ))))) ~Dino James
Date: 5/29/2015 8:28:00 PM
James, love your place of tranquility, I am in there too, a well done 7 . . .
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James Fraser
Date: 6/3/2015 2:44:00 PM
Thank you 'Broken Wings' I'm really enjoying the 'Ottava rima' form, James :)

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