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The river runs toward its destiny While I ride toward my mother, the sea

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/21/2012 9:21:00 PM
Barbara,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*
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Date: 10/29/2012 12:36:00 PM
And I the ripple become entranced. Becoming waves the sea enhanced
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Date: 10/25/2012 6:47:00 AM
Very nice Barbara.Congrats on your win in the contest.
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Date: 10/23/2012 7:19:00 PM
BARBARA,,, CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN...PD
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Date: 10/23/2012 11:01:00 AM
congratulations on your win friend Barbara :)
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Date: 10/23/2012 8:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Barbara! love/hugs:) Leonora
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Date: 10/23/2012 7:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem Barbara. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/23/2012 4:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine win Babara xx
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Date: 10/23/2012 1:00:00 AM
Beautiful Barbara. Many congrats for this win luv.
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Date: 10/22/2012 11:21:00 PM
CONGRATS BG ON A SUPERB WRITE AND WIN LUV ..
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Date: 10/22/2012 6:22:00 PM
Sure made me think! the river's mother is the sea too aye? Congrad's on your big win! Light & Love
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Date: 10/22/2012 6:21:00 PM
I like the image of the river and it mother sea. Congratulations.
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Date: 10/22/2012 3:35:00 PM
Oh, I love poems referring to the sea as mother. VERY nice. And congrats on your win.
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Date: 10/8/2012 11:28:00 AM
Very interesting write!
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Date: 10/8/2012 2:16:00 AM
Well written Barbara. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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