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Tour of Duty

In honor of Remembrance Day and those that serve. Tour of Duty© I awaken from a fitful sleep One where slumber was not very deep The night before after counting many a sheep My eyes closed and they did meet A dream was had that made me sneep You and I were there in a jeep As I mentioned another tour you said nary a peep But in your eyes I capture “what the bleep” We both know the long stay at an outkeep The enemy would be nearby and they are prone to creep The sacrifice again would require a big leap Is this a mistake or am I being wheep Once again into our love my duty does seep For a promise I knew I could not keep Is the price for going to war really this cheap The returns not guaranteed and the climb out steep Or maybe we need to stop and make a clean sweep And throw our relationship onto the scrapheap Hearing those words make us both weep For a promise I knew I could not keep Andreas Simic©

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/13/2017 1:06:00 PM
I can read in this the amount of mental thought that runs through your situation. Love is the most difficult to keep when there is a disconnect in the communication causing a lack of understanding. I pray you may find more comfort in sharing and writing on your poetic journey. Another great poem. :-)
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Andreas Simic
Date: 11/14/2017 4:50:00 AM
Kristina, I appreciate your comments they are well thought out and insightful. Thanks.

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