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Tough Love...

Are the Angel's feathers double dipped, quills of gold but bloody tipped... is wrath upon the many unknowing, going,showing unhealthy stowing... ungracious of the promised precious, only looking for their next delicious... Tough love,may be a reminder fellows once,can be,fellows again if only to feel,and then remember, a part of the whole begins within'...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/29/2010 11:33:00 AM
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Date: 12/1/2010 1:02:00 AM
Poems like this make me think to myself, "Hey! Why didn't I think of that?!" This read was much enjoyed. Loved the descriptions and your choice of words. I am hooked. I look forward to reading more of your masterpieces, Jay. Love, Maya *
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Date: 10/4/2010 3:15:00 PM
Enjoyed reading of your work..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Your kind comments blessed my spirit..Sara
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Date: 9/21/2010 5:10:00 PM
Luv your creative write tonight Jay.. an awesome voice in your lines luv.. Angel's rock and they are our friends... so hang with them luv..
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