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Touching Me

Your hand brushes my face and once again, I feel alive Your lips meet mine and once again, I feel connected Your body opens up to me and once again, I feel desired Your heart reaches into mine and for the first time, I feel loved

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Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/24/2014 6:23:00 AM

Very sweet! A tender write.... soft as a prayer.

Jan Allison

Date: 7/23/2014 3:20:00 PM

wonderful expression here David i loved this verse. Hugs jan xx

David Brown
Date: 7/23/2014 4:37:00 PM

As always, thank you for your kind words Jan. David

Gry Christensen

Date: 7/23/2014 3:18:00 PM

We never get tired of the wonderful feeling of being wanted. Very expressive and filled with emotions, this poem. I truly enjoyed it.

David Brown
Date: 7/23/2014 4:36:00 PM

Thank you so much, I look forward to reading your work. David

Tom Mcmurray

Date: 7/23/2014 3:03:00 PM

A great expression of feeling. I enjoyed this effort David. tom

David Brown
Date: 7/23/2014 4:36:00 PM

Thanks Tom, look forward to reading your work. David.