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Touched By Your Flame

In whispers of night you come to me and fill my head with visions. This passion is what sets me free and feeds all my decisions. For I conclude you are the one; the skies have told me so. If you but blink you'll burn the sun. Your flame of love does grow. This quick desire for you is strong; my lamp will light your way. And we shall burn the whole night long; until the light of day. My soul's touched by your wondrous flame; your love fills deep my heart. Never will I be the same; dearest we shall not part. for "Touched By Your Flame" contest

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Date: 6/6/2013 8:56:00 PM
Deb, congratulation in Gail's "touching flame" contest... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 6/5/2013 2:18:00 AM
loved it Deb .Congrats ...Seren
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Date: 6/4/2013 12:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning place Deb love , well done xx
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Date: 5/31/2013 10:44:00 PM
S-mail on this one... :o)
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Date: 5/29/2013 9:00:00 AM
Gratifyingly powerful. The last stanza took it home. A wonderful declaration of heart.
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Date: 5/29/2013 5:51:00 AM
Wow such passion is within your tenderhearted write my friend! I just loved reading this stupendous poem Deb! I am enthralled by the splendor of your wondrous piece! What a fantastic poem, Great Work!!
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