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clouds caress the sky with a trail of white feathers... grass tickles our toes
............................................. 7/13/15 For Skat's Contest: "Feathers"

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Date: 7/17/2015 9:50:00 PM
I love this, Carrie! I've seen clouds that look feathery and this reminded me of them. Congrats on your win with this fantastic haiku! Going in my favs. Love, KIm
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Date: 7/17/2015 8:15:00 PM
what a carefree beauty Carrie...congrats!
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Date: 7/16/2015 4:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win a 7
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Date: 7/16/2015 3:33:00 PM
Congratulations, Carrie! Love this traditional haiku! hugs
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Date: 7/16/2015 11:15:00 AM
lovely Carrie congrats on win hugs 7
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Date: 7/16/2015 11:08:00 AM
Reminds me of the innocence of my childhood summers. Congrats on your win, Carrie. :) Janece
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Carrie Richards
Date: 7/16/2015 1:33:00 PM
Thank you so much Janece !! So nice to hear from you!
Date: 7/16/2015 6:40:00 AM
Carrie this is beautiful and the picture will keep recurring in my mind throughout the day...
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Date: 7/16/2015 4:26:00 AM
This is haiku at its best Carrie. Kudos on your win! 7 for me!
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Date: 7/15/2015 11:50:00 PM
a perfect example of true haiku. Congrats, and I just love this.
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Date: 7/15/2015 11:16:00 PM
So sweet! Congrats !
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Date: 7/15/2015 11:11:00 PM
Carrie this is a delight to read, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 7/15/2015 10:46:00 PM
Lovely, joyful innocent reflection, Carrie, and a worthy win. Well done. Viv x
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Date: 7/15/2015 10:43:00 PM
Hello, Carrie, amazing:) Congratulations on your awesome feather win. **SKAT**
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Date: 7/13/2015 11:17:00 PM
Love this one!
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