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Touched By Your Flame

The cold wind galloped through the night Riding with winter's relentless fury And the trees howled with all their might As they stood shivering in the plunging mercury We were averse to venture outside Reluctant to face the galloping beast Taking warmth that the fireplace provided With a hot cup of cocoa at least As we snuggled in loves sweet warmth We became hypnotized by the flame As it swayed with an elusive charm We drifted off, as sweet dreams came When the fire had died and only ashes remained My heart still glowed, touched by your flame

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/6/2013 8:57:00 PM
Joseph, congratulation in Gail's "touching flame" contest... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 6/5/2013 2:21:00 AM
I liked this very much Joseph ...Seren
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Date: 6/4/2013 1:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning place Joseph xx
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Date: 5/26/2013 6:15:00 AM
full of passion excellent Linda
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Date: 5/25/2013 8:42:00 AM
Beautiful. You made winter as alive as the couple snuggled inside in the warmth.
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Date: 5/24/2013 10:53:00 AM
This is lovely Joseph, well done xx
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Date: 5/24/2013 10:52:00 AM
- I was "grabbed" in this delightful poem Joseph .... Good luck in the contest! - Have a great weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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