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Touch the Earth

“God loves you.” She learned this from a young age, but in her wandering, she found decay, destruction, the absence of warmth. “God will protect you,” but she fell time and time again until her hands and knees were stained with her doubts and regrets. “God is just and faithful,” but she found harsh, biting cruelty and sank into the darkness where the light couldn’t touch her, and the moon and the stars were blackened with her longing and wishing for a god that would reach down to touch the earth.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/15/2016 1:19:00 PM
Amy Callahan,,, you've expressed yourself well, I enjoyed your poem. ~LINDA~
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Date: 9/6/2015 1:31:00 PM
AMy, Enjoyed stopping by to read your poem today. Luv **SKAT**
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Date: 10/31/2014 2:41:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Amy - I choose your first very lovely written poem - I like it a lot !! - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/26/2014 8:24:00 PM
I believe you captured a feeling that many people have -- a god that is absence and empty words used like slogans. I also believe that their is a God who loves us passionately . . . don't let the world fool you, keep searching past the slogans find the still small voice -- this voice filled with wisdom, light and love. Great poem, keep writing. All the best.
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