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Touch of the Wind

As a cool breeze passes my face. I feel as though I'm going to change. The calm of the wind goes by. I feel like I've got to try. The passion i feel is so strong. As though there is nothing wrong. The gush of the wind moves so powerful. As it makes me wonder and think very doubtful. As the birds fly so briskly through the sky. They move as though they are very much alive. On a cool and rainy night. It's more untamed when you're in sight.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/10/2011 1:01:00 PM
Very nice poem. Jimmy
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Date: 2/9/2011 6:07:00 PM
Welcome to the site. I know you will like it here. This is not a bad first submission.
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