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Touch Me

I am sitting in the dark, silently. Sipping a drink as I did many times in the past. Only now I am blushing, for my skin has never been caressed with such deep voice before. Those gentle vibes are dancing all over my body and I cannot help but shiver. Finally I surrender and let that sound please me. Your warm whisper floating across the room stops at my table and rests on my ears. A muffled groan comes out of my mouth. Suddenly I feel speechless, naked… Covered only with your words, which suit me perfectly. The room is fulfilled with applause, brighten by lights escaping through the window as I walk away. I left my glass slipper on the table with a bitter- sweet lipstick mark on it.

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Date: 6/26/2020 1:26:00 PM
Your first post was quite sensual and clever. I like your last two lines. Your poem reminds me of the song, "Killing Me Softly with His Song"
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Date: 4/16/2020 5:16:00 PM
Always good to read from someone with style and panache. Will read more of your work. Best regards David PS What is situation in Poland. We don't get much news about your country in NZ
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Date: 4/1/2016 3:55:00 PM
A nice piece I like the imagery and its warm language." Covered only in your words"
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Date: 1/3/2015 4:50:00 PM
I thought TOUCH ME was provocative. I. Thought of Cinderella initially. It's a great thought provoking love poem.
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Date: 10/9/2014 11:51:00 AM
wow...the whole picture is amazing...you should put the two together and enter it into the seduce me contest...you might like something I did with Seren Roberts called heaven sent....hugs Tim
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Date: 9/22/2014 11:28:00 AM
truly very beautifully painted excellent piece
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Date: 9/22/2014 11:05:00 AM
Hi Danka! From the comments below I realize that you are a newcomer on Soup....so welcome! I have enjoyed this introductory poem of yours....romantic and mysterious at the same time, and with a fitting ending. Well done! Sunny Maltese wishes! // paul
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Date: 9/22/2014 5:05:00 AM
beautiful write up, welcome to the soup family
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Date: 9/4/2014 7:58:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Danka - I choose your first great written poem- You write skillfully - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/3/2014 12:51:00 PM
A very unique write. Welcome to PoetrySoup! If you click on a name or avatar... You will be lead to that persons poems... Leave a comment and they will have a permanent link back to your poetry... And keep writting!
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Danka Sikorska
Date: 9/4/2014 5:38:00 AM
Thank you Carol ;) I definitely will check other writes as well ;) I love poetry ;)
Date: 9/3/2014 10:38:00 AM
Danka, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/2/2014 6:26:00 PM
Danka,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 9/2/2014 6:12:00 PM
Nicely written! Welcome to the soup!! =) - Edward
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Date: 9/2/2014 2:13:00 PM
love this!
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