Touch Me

Touch me in the morning Like each unique sunrise Touch me in the evening Like a burning coal alive Touch me at noonday Make embers be flame Touch me in the evening All my dreams sustain After all these long years My heart belongs to you So touch me love today For I long for love true___ Finis

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/26/2012 5:46:00 PM

wow, this is a wonderful love poem, Sara. Awesome!!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/25/2012 9:05:00 AM

beautiful rhyme and flow, accompanying such sentimental thoughts, sara... :) huggs!

Russell Sivey

Date: 5/24/2012 7:45:00 PM

This is a wonderful write my friend! Awesome and lovely poem you have written Sara! Great Work!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/24/2012 7:32:00 PM

Sara,this poem is very touching... the sun, a view to praise... ~~ Sara, can you please tell Doris, i hope she feels better.. and it makes me sad, everything she is going through... Hug,s to both of you ladies..always PD

Susan Simpkins

Date: 5/24/2012 6:56:00 PM

Very nice little poem

Debbie Duncan

Date: 5/24/2012 6:55:00 PM

I really like the way this flows,,,, thank you for reading my " KHAN " blessings today and always Sara ;}

Brenda Victoria Northeast

Date: 5/24/2012 6:34:00 PM

Beautiful Sara- loved the passion in your write