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Totaly Eclipsed

Moon on fire kissing souls unite sparks in destiny your spirit flying towards the sun Honey dew rises in light of a promise dazzling warm golden blinding mirror reflections Sparkling brightly rainbows floating on a breathless air Gasping frozen inside thoughts you are grasping at the heartstrings Eclipse of love splendid delight a porthole of Heaven has opened up One look in your eyes seventh wonder a golden stairway on wings spirit of beauty an eagle over mountains call Flying with your soul crystal clear blue horizon before the eyes arising flowers you beautifully Eclipsing the heart beautiful tonight I pray with one in a thousand angels dream

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/27/2015 10:49:00 PM
THIs is a most heavenly Eclipse of LOVE! Beautiful writing!
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Date: 8/27/2015 11:00:00 AM
Delightful romantic beauty, Liam! An apt ending, too, for an eclipse of love. Hope you are keeping well! All the best. // paul
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Date: 8/21/2015 4:20:00 PM
Hi Liam!A very beautiful romantic enchanting love poem penned by you my dearest friend Liam.Another sparkling diamond from your very beautiful golden pen.Just dazzling!So very beautifully written!A very dreamy, sweet captivating love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.Awesome!I truly enjoy it.A true golden gem!Your pen is mighty golden!A 7 +++!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful romantic,gentle and sweet.Keep your Faith!Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Date: 8/21/2015 1:56:00 PM
- Beautifully, dear Liam !!! - The angels came to the right place !!! - Hugs and love // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/21/2015 12:05:00 PM
Beautiful and romantic, dear Liam. As always...the love shines. hugs
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