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Total Eclipse of the Sun

TOTAL ECLIPSE OF THE SUN We watched horrified, awe-struck for hours while the sun died Slowly, shorn of long golden locks, suffocated by the oncoming moon-rock. Samson, blinded. His eyes bitten out - nothing left - Devoured, destroyed : then completely consumed as he died in silence, In his Stygian cave, as he gave up the ghost, as he left us alone. Shadow of moon like a hunter’s pitch cloak encroached with vulture speed . Birds, even the skylark, silenced, harking in their stark branches For the inky wings of the angel of death, coming - not to Ramases - to us. Bleak mark in the east dark: coming fast - it was upon us even as we asked What is it? Grey through miles of mist, then raven-darker, as it closed on us, Swooped us into its black veil, sunless, lightless, lifeless - where no bird sings, And our breath stopped, held, unnoticed: and we, bereft, waited in mourning. Till the sun -Samson- with re-grown bright hair poured out behind the moon, Miraculously rose from the dead, pushed the black cave-stone into oblivion And pierced a hole in the veil, burning that hole infinitely, gloriously, And we were restored to life in the smile of heaven. …………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… Note: A total solar eclipse is an unforgettable sight. This poem is about such an eclipse which I saw in Weyburn, Saskatchewan i n 1977. One cannot help being struck by the loss of the sun in the daytime. Birds and animals also react strangely. I recommend anyone to try to see a total solar eclipse if it is possible. A partial solar eclipse, or a lunar eclipse, are not remotely as spectacular as a total solar eclipse.

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Date: 8/20/2014 10:00:00 AM
Sidney, congratulations with your winning poem... Always~ Linda
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Date: 8/20/2014 6:00:00 AM
Brilliant and well crafted piece on total eclipse of the sun, Sidney. congrats
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Date: 8/19/2014 9:22:00 PM
I don't think I have seen a total eclipse of the sun in my lifetime. I am sure I would have remembered. This is wonderfully written and such a sight would be awe inspiring, especially if you were not educated about eclipses as the prehistoric folks could not have been. It must have been terrifying for them. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 8/19/2014 4:40:00 PM
WOW< what stunning imagery. This is one of the very best that I am reading on the winners' list.Big congrats.
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Date: 8/19/2014 1:37:00 PM
Hey Everyone! When I said 'Off you go now' I didn't know you were totally going to blow my mind, not all of you at once! I am honored to have read your poetry. Thank You for entering my contest! Off You Go Now, Judy
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Date: 8/3/2011 3:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Syd. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/2/2011 6:04:00 PM
Go Syd...look at this great write moving on up! And such a unique write at that!![no haven't been feeling too well getting better daily ;)] miss you! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 4/19/2011 1:24:00 PM
Geeeezzzz Louise Syd you blew my socks off! The whole magilla, metaphor, simile, personification, historic refferance, real life happenings, no need to tell you how special this write is. Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 4/19/2011 11:51:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Linda, Sydney
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Date: 4/19/2011 7:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's contest "Razzle, Dazzle" Sydney. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/19/2011 4:57:00 AM
You described it exactly as it is. The worlds stands still in silence for awhile. This is simply DAZZLING, Sydney. I love this. Thank you for bringing that vision back to me. Many congrats on your win. Lainie
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Date: 4/18/2011 8:50:00 PM
Congrats Syd on your success in my contest luv.. appreciate your constant support ... the winners list is finally posted after many days of contest problems.. all fixed now to view..luv..
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Date: 2/24/2011 9:42:00 AM
Congratulations Sydney, on your well deserved win for your poem in Debbie Guzzi's contest "Anything Goes". Love, Carol
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Date: 2/16/2011 10:51:00 AM
Hi Syd. I, too, have witnessed a total solar eclipse. It is, as you say, a most spectacular sight. You have rendered it's power, awe and magic so brilliantly in this work. Congratulations. Love, Deb
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Date: 2/15/2011 11:13:00 AM
I know I read this before, but don't see my comment here. I love the way you describe the umbra surrounding the solar eclipse and compare it to Samson's bright hair. What a great metaphor, Syd. Congratulations on your win in Deb's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/15/2011 8:46:00 AM
congrats on placing second with this technically adept metaphorical poem...
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Date: 2/14/2011 10:59:00 PM
Wow! How dramatically and brilliantly you have captured this spectacular event. Congrats on your big win. Lainie
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Date: 2/14/2011 10:14:00 PM
how dare you win over me syd, when you said you just wanted to see this poem of mine to enjoy it, lol!! i hail you!! congrats, my dear nemesis.. hahaha, :) hugggs, nette
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Date: 2/14/2011 8:42:00 PM
Sydney, congratulations on winning in Debbie's contest with this fine entry.
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Date: 2/14/2011 8:26:00 PM
Many congrats to you on your fine placement with this almost frightening piece. BG
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Date: 2/14/2011 7:53:00 PM
Congrats Syd on your super win in Debbie's contest with this brilliant beauty luv.. enjoy..
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Date: 2/14/2011 7:52:00 PM
It is really an awesome experience. A wondrous write my friend. Many congrats.
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Date: 2/14/2011 5:53:00 PM
This poem, shed light on the darkness of those hours, when people didn't understand the phenonomen of such an event....Outstanding writing, Sydney!! Great job for a well deserved win!
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Date: 2/14/2011 5:40:00 PM
Wonderful writing Sydney. No wonder it terrified people who hadn't been forewarned. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/12/2011 6:50:00 AM
Just wonderful! please reformate Syd the note on the bottom is running too far to the right and it causes lots of trouble for me in trying to judge. SO glad to see you participating more. Hug T for me! Light & Love
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