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Tornado Alley

the tornadoes path
      ran through the central texas
tornado alley

natural disastersnaturehaiku

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Edward Orozco

Date: 5/25/2009 1:28:00 PM

Nice! Beautiful haiku. - jeremia

Raul Moreno

Date: 1/6/2009 8:50:00 PM

Nice haiku, I live in Oklahoma and I can relate with it...Raul

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 11/21/2008 7:24:00 PM

Ed Natures Ravaging imagery in your write! Laura :)

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 11/17/2008 10:02:00 AM

This has perfect form and the words come together well to express the thoughts and create the imagery defined by the author. Very well done. Michael

James Foulk

Date: 10/13/2008 10:34:00 AM

yes a very vivid piece of poetry, enjoyed it. thank you for reading my little spider and for your comment. i did check out your web site for your book, could not open it though, saw your book on there, but could not get any farther with it, will try later, am happy for you. how is your book doing?

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 8/27/2008 9:55:00 PM

This is quite vivid. I can see the imagery very clearly. Great job! ~Joseph

Date: 8/21/2008 11:29:00 AM

I think more than one place can attest to "tornado alley" this year. This is such an apt description and a timely poem. Thank you for all your kind words and congrats. Keep on writing. I hope you will be posting more soon. Karen

Sharon Winter

Date: 6/10/2008 4:44:00 PM

Terrifying part of mother nature. Would never want t be in the path of one of those. Love, Shar

Sean Kelly

Date: 6/10/2008 9:15:00 AM

Dangerous site , Ed , but well presented Haiku....