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Tornado

It came spiraling recklessly, and they let it carry them anywhere it wanted to go. There were trees, fishing nets, a tractor, a swinging chair, people.....anything that crossed its path. Neighbors who lived secret lives were exposed; a cow was so air-sick that it puked out a boy's toy he thought was stolen by his father, to sell to get gambling money; pens rubbed themselves against books, writing stories that no one had the courage to write about himself or herself..... everyone could see the reality in the eye of the tornado. Soon, the tornado faded and left them vulnerable, naked, puzzled. "Truth can be so messy," an old lady whispered.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/25/2016 11:38:00 PM
"pens rubbed themselves against books, writing stories that no one had the courage to write about himself or herself..." You do have an imagination, Teddy. This was thought-provoking for me, in the idea that at any moment, a force of nature can blow in, tearing off people's facades, revealing people's hidden secrets ... perhaps the moral is to not wear any masks. Original narrative.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 5/28/2016 5:45:00 AM
..........another problem with the tornado or tornadoes is that they can't be detected or avoided, lolest. Well, thanks Timothy, for enjoying my piece!! :-)

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