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Torn To Pieces

Those dark days spent when my spirit weary Bereft of hope, joy and song I lay entombed within my room Whispered thoughts to pen and paper Seeking solace in written verse My heart torn cut to pieces I wrote of external things but not my trials No one knew, no one could see The pain I carried beneath feign smiles I struggled blindly through halls of darkness Seeking respite from my faith My heart torn cut to pieces With no foreknowledge there would come A stranger, who between lines would read, My whispered thoughts and through his pen Reach down deep where none have been With gentle hands to stitch and mend My torn heart cut to pieces Your persistent care, your words that soothe Across the miles my burden bearing You brought the light to guide my way With endearing names and ten page letters Bringing much laughter to ease my pain And heal my heart that once was torn

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/9/2010 5:44:00 AM
hot poems
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Date: 2/9/2010 12:35:00 AM
beautifully written
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Date: 2/8/2010 5:41:00 AM
great poem
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Date: 2/5/2010 11:55:00 AM
Heartfelt write Audrey, leading to a light at the end of the line, thank you for sharing a piece of your inner heart >> James,x
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Date: 2/5/2010 7:53:00 AM
great poem and so relevant for me
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Date: 2/3/2010 6:39:00 PM
nicely done.Hope everything is good.Thanx for your comments.
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Date: 2/3/2010 8:46:00 AM
a good and warm write we all need to find that one person to heal that broken heart really warm and good write very good job keep writting
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Date: 2/2/2010 5:12:00 PM
Thats really good, nice work, the first line is a bit odd...
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Date: 2/2/2010 10:04:00 AM
You might EMail the message, if you like, I will sent my EMail address to you by Soup Mail, Moses
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Date: 2/2/2010 10:01:00 AM
Good morning Audrey, The master love's heart has all descernment of hearts, and can communicate to another just what is needed, when one's heart is hurting. Sometimes the one that communicates the healing doesn't even know that they are doing so. This is why we need to be obedient to Love's voice. PS: there was a server error, and I did not recieve your Soup Mail, please try again, or comment it on a poem. Sincerely, love Moses
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Date: 2/2/2010 3:00:00 AM
Very personal words Audrey.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments & kind words today.
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Date: 2/1/2010 11:25:00 AM
we are all that to each other here. each one of us jilted yet we give and recieve. this poem is a precious piece. a testimony to pain and peace. vengeful thoughts we can release. when we find out love wins and defeats. john
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Date: 2/1/2010 8:33:00 AM
"Whispered thoughts to pen and paper" one, of many beautiful lines in this wonderful poem. This is poetry at its best. I want to thank you so much for your comment on my poem, Pegasus, The Winged Steed, a mythological story. It is an interest I have just discovered recently, Timeless tales of Gods and Heroes, and I intend to write much more on these myths. They are an endless source of inspiration. Fascinating stories, even if one is doubtful, it makes for some good poetry, to ponder......
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Date: 1/31/2010 11:24:00 PM
audrey, this is a precious poem and you have worn your heart for all to see. Very nice, dear, and thanks for your comment to me. Luv, Andrea ps. sounds like you found someone wonderful in your life!
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Date: 1/31/2010 3:53:00 PM
A charming well expressed poem, Audrey. -Robert
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Date: 1/31/2010 2:21:00 PM
Awesome! Audrey! I understand the pain you underwent and I am so glad someone brought you the light you needed to find your way out of the darkness. May you both be very happy always. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your nice review on my poem. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 1/31/2010 1:49:00 PM
A beautiful tribute to the luv of your life after enduring such heartache and pain.. there is always a silver lining after the storm.. and no one more deserving than u dear Audrey... thankxxx for your nice comments on my collaboration poem with Marty as well as my poems too.. so very thoughtful of u ... luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 1/31/2010 1:06:00 PM
I think we all can relate to this.
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Date: 1/31/2010 12:55:00 PM
Hi Audrey, I love your poem...I'm so glad you're mending...Keep on keeping on!!! I hope you find the happeness you are seeking...Enjoy all your works...Marty
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Date: 1/31/2010 12:15:00 PM
That sounds like a great friend to have. I hope that the heart continues to mend. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for the comments on my work "Handy Man". I enjoyed writing it. Sara
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Date: 1/31/2010 12:04:00 PM
A listening ear....from one who cares, can do wonders to heal a heart. Lovely and insightful poem, Audrey. ~ Carrie
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Date: 1/31/2010 11:06:00 AM
Isn't it wonderful to find someone who can read between the lines and sense the turmoil within your heart, Audrey? To have a friend like this is a special gift and I'm so glad his compassion was able to help mend your torn heart. This is a great site to meet people such as the one you describe. I have found them here too and will favorite this poem as a reminder of my appreciation to them. Love, Carolyn
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