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Torn

A wall of bricks between us Almost Impossible to take apart every time we try,it breaks both our hearts Even though we are meant to be The whole world always disagrees We could never love another Like we love each other But no one now can take the blame The feelings will still be the same Fight after fight You can never be my knight All the hurt you put me through Yet still our love is always true Love just may truly be blind And has been before our time Just close our eyes and pretend That this moment will never end   Is there anything else left to mend We were meant to be more then friends It is funny how things can change in time And how you will never be again be mine So maybe if we were in another life I wouldn't have to use this knife

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/19/2012 6:00:00 AM
A belated but warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Amber. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol 06/19
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Date: 6/19/2012 2:43:00 AM
Excellent poem written here!!
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Date: 6/18/2012 3:30:00 AM
I feel the pain. That last line is definitely poignant. It's crazy how much humans have to fight against a system we ourselves created. Nice poem Amber!
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Amber Rose
Date: 6/18/2012 11:44:00 AM
Thank-you
Date: 6/17/2012 6:19:00 PM
LOVE IT!!!... it's so good! It's probably... you'll never believe this... one of my favorites!Once again, I want you to know that this poem is incredible... you should really think about getting it published. I know a great website that publishes poetry in a book and you can win prizes. (It's a contest.) You could easily win; this poem is dynamite! Visit poeticpossibilities.tk and you'll find it under the tab: "Monthly Contest." You really should enter it... it is a truly outstanding poem.
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Amber Rose
Date: 6/17/2012 6:20:00 PM
Thanks and I will go to that website
Date: 6/17/2012 6:11:00 PM
I love this poem... it's so good! It's probably... you'll never believe this... one of my favorites!Once again, I want you to know that this poem is incredible... you should really think about getting it published. I know a great website that publishes poetry in a book and you can win prizes. (It's a contest.) You could easily win; this poem is dynamite! Visit poeticpossibilities.tk and you'll find it under the tab: "Monthly Contest." You really should enter it... it is a truly outstanding poem.
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