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Below is the poem entitled Torn which was written by poet Jasmine Whipps. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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I don't know which to choose,
Both treat me as though
I'm his queen to be.
Wish I knew which way to go,
Because now I'm a bit confused.
One says he loves 
And only wants to see me smile.
The other says he loves me,
And wants me to walk down the aisle.
But I don't know,
I'm torn between the two.
And to be honest 
I love them both,
Just don't know which
I love the most.
Hope they can understand
That they both are the better man
But right now I just didn't plan
On choosing between them both.

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  1. Date: 10/15/2010 5:17:00 AM
    Starting my weekend early reading all the amazing poetry of all the wonderful poets here at PoetrySoup. I am so happy to find your poetry posted here this morning Jasmine. Have a wonderful weekend and I hope you find tons of inspiration along the way as Fall is upon us. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/14/2010 6:11:00 AM
    I'll bet you can choose if you put some thought into it.

  1. Date: 10/14/2010 5:09:00 AM
    Such is the triangle of life, always leaving you in undecided state, Jasmine