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Torn

broken pieces shattered and unformed no telling the difference of what is yet to come cold and unkind discouraged and down all about is doubt my own life is a jigsaw puzzle never telling the fate of time but all my life is doubtful and bleak nowhere to turn who once was by my side fled as danger approaches who once was my friend claimed now to never known me i want to be myself but i want everyone to like me it's like i want to stand out but not alone either how can i decide? between those choices now i am torn

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/15/2008 1:12:00 PM
Much to think about here. Nice use of imagery. Congratulations on having your poem selected as one of the winners in John's contest. Keep on writing. Wishing you continued success. Karen
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Date: 10/12/2008 3:11:00 PM
Karima - Congratulations on your honorable mention in Johns poetry contest - God Bless
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Date: 10/12/2008 9:41:00 AM
Congratulations Karima on your Honorable Mention in John's contest! Well done! Love, Shar
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