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Torment the Shadows

in my world i have a key to unlock the depths of which i may not yet be accustomed to unlock the sorrow of which i may not wish to renounce will they ask me to gather all their bloody remorse and ignominious alibis so that i may or may not replace this space with something more righteous and stable or will i just leave it there to desperately ask them rhetorical questions and wait for blatant and heartfelt honesty

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/29/2014 1:34:00 PM
- A warm welcome to the P- Soup, Marisa - The year 2014 is almost over ... and I look forward to reading new poems from you in the new year 2015 - Happy New Year! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/28/2014 8:46:00 AM
MARISA, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy being part of the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, "In The Moment" in hopes it inspires you to write again. I look forward in following you and your poetry:) Enjoy this site, and the coming New Year! From: your new poet friend@-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 12/27/2014 1:11:00 PM
This novel piece of creativity quite impressed me...very good, Marisa!!
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Date: 12/27/2014 7:39:00 AM
Awesome write on confusion, marisa
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