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Topsy Turvy

all behind me now a memory of blue sky a nebulous cloud haloing darkness before me mystery awaits the plunge I peer sightless into dark roots tendril to me a grasping sight, intriguing my golden curls dangle downward imbalance betrays I teeter on the abyss enraptured, sound echoing back lit baby fall seek the navels ending point heroine of day dreams, topple leave the precipice seek the joy of choice and fall now, peeked, plunge, now called, now fall What I would write based on picture 1 for my contest

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Date: 12/12/2013 7:24:00 PM
Debbie Nice poem picture of the picture you saw. Very detailed and full of imagery. The descriptive nature allows the reader to see what you are seeing. Great job Thanks for the congrats on my Gobble Fun poem.
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Date: 8/4/2013 6:01:00 PM
I like the picture you wrote Debbie ;}
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Date: 7/30/2013 12:18:00 AM
I really like how you wrote for your own pictures. I can see now that they were pictures in your contest. Great model for us!
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