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Top of Umbrellas

Multicolor rain Hitting tops of umbrellas Painting new ideas Letting people know the truth Of what lies beyond the skies
Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/29/2012 1:31:00 AM
Russell great tanka, good visions..David
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Date: 6/28/2012 10:38:00 PM
Tanka-divine! I loved what Vie said about those transparent ubrelllas. It too reminded me of the images in your poem...colorful arrangement of words, Russell. luv,gwendolen
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Date: 6/28/2012 9:15:00 PM
creative write and so true.Rain does that -not only colours but feel too when it falls from the little gap thru the umbrella:)
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