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Took No Time To Lay

She exists with high curiosity Standing out in the cool brisk air at night Moon took no time to lay, it did swiftly And she surely breathes the dark air tonight Her heart is broken, all thoughts are deadly She sees with the string of her eyes in sight The inner soul of her life doesn’t fit The moon explains just about all of it Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/12/2014 7:24:00 AM
this has a lovely flow Russell sad too great pen hugs
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Date: 2/11/2014 1:20:00 PM
A powerful descriptive prowess;I really enjoy it Russell;kudos for a job well done.
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Date: 2/11/2014 10:55:00 AM
I wonder who this she is?...Enjoyed reading your descriptive work today..I hope that her heart heals..Thanks for the visits to my page..I have finished Wild..Sara
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Date: 2/11/2014 6:39:00 AM
What a great piece. I love the form and it flows so well. Tim
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Date: 2/11/2014 3:24:00 AM
Russell this is an excellent write, it creates a wonderful image, well done...David
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