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Took Me Back

The cottage was no more than a shack, But it kinda took me back, To that place, I grew up and spent me days, Livin and learnin, its all sort of a haze. We was poor, but always had enough to eat. Me dad was hard, and oh, me mum was sweet. A good combination to raise a lad, An I was mostly always happy with what I had. Fishin and explorin just my ol dawg an me, A good life, as it all come back to my memory. For a kid not havin much, there's a thing to be said, He appreciates what he's got, an makes do instead. Most don't crave more that what they've got. Ya see, poor kids don't really find they need a lot, A pole for fishin, a log on which to sit, A stick to throw the dawg, a few friends close knit. To keep fit, for fun an exercise a creek to swim in, But things all change when he grows to notice women. Then its time to move to the big smoke. Women aint all that interested in a poor bloke. They like to be romanced and as you probably know, That requires a good job to earn a fair bit of dough. It was time I said farewell, I was off to the city, Got a job and tried my luck findin a lass very pretty. Now with the misses an our four kids, life's good. I try hard not to spoil em, even though I could. I am a happy bloke, take everything in my stride, But I kinda look back on that little shack, with pride. Sponsor Brian Strand Contest Name A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE NO 1200 March 2023

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Date: 2/27/2023 12:09:00 PM
I love these little trips down memory lane, Good poem, filled with life’s lessons. John
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Merv Hold
Date: 3/1/2023 5:10:00 PM
Thanks Mate. Yes they are easy to write if you don't have to make anything up.
Date: 2/26/2023 5:38:00 PM
Whey Hey Merv, very muchan Oz version of my Yorkie childhood and life in sentiment. You with dog and fishing pole, me with dog and shotgun to help feed the family. But, we both did ok in our way - you to the City me a short but eventful Army life which provided friendships lasting to,this very day. Good poem
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Merv Hold
Date: 2/27/2023 4:48:00 AM
Hey hey, I didn't think you were being critical. I appreciate the more refined style for this website. I was reading some of the contests. They are sticklers for spelling and syllable counts and good grammar. That's what I meant by lassoing it in. I take my hat off to your style Terry. Your rhyming flows without abusing the king's English. I must try to do the same. No offense taken my good man. Even when you DO mean offense, I don't bruise easily . Hahah.
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Terry Ireland
Date: 2/27/2023 4:37:00 AM
No. I was meaning UK compared to Oz lifestyle. Love your Aussie style just as it is. Hate you to think I was being critical in any way because I wasn’t
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Merv Hold
Date: 2/27/2023 4:11:00 AM
Seems I get to reply to your comment, Thanks Terry Your poetry is more professional than mine. I have adopted the out back style from some old Australian Poets. I will attempt to lasso it into a style more befitting Soup.

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