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Too Scared (Revised/ Number 2)

Sometimes Im so scared to talk so scared that i will walk up to you one day and go for my smile and hug and be ~Rejected Sometimes I can barely breath barely breath so bad because of you, you steal from me ~ My breath Sometimes im so blind i cant see a thing because you fill up ~ My eyes Sometimes i dont want to touch because the feeling of your skin is like ~A Dream Sometimes i want to taste the flavor that is perfect for me your lips touching so breifly against anothers ~Mine Sometimes i don't want to smell your rich cologn because it lingers and haunts ~ My mind Sometimes i think i almost could wish that i didnt know you because then i wouldnt feel this ~ Love Sometimes i wish i had the guts to tell you how i feel to let you know this is real but then ~ I get too scared

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Date: 6/10/2009 1:27:00 PM
a beautiful love poem! Jese, James
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Date: 6/8/2009 10:07:00 AM
I love both original & This Revised:But i prefer Revised Cs of the Structure.Keep on Writing;And "But,Ma" is regarding The Old Times Wid M'Mom,so Yew Shd Know weve all got These FamiLy-Probsz So um,Kisses:)(Very awkward as i Never actualy Write "Kisses":p)
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Date: 6/5/2009 12:28:00 PM
aww love is a funny thing, I was nervours to tell all at first too, but when my husband told me the first time I told him right back I love you too, he was scared too, he thought i would run a mile but I didn't and we met in december 2007 and we were married in april 2008, yea just 4 months, so sometimes love comes fast and smoth, you could explain and ask how they would feel if you said you think you have feelings for them see how they take it then build up to it, God bless you from diane
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